Narration Transcript

This is the transcript of the narration i recorded for my film. We later decided it needed some serious work and we called this one our "first draft"

First Draft, film

We kept on editing in school and in the studio, and we've finished a rough copy of the film.




When we looked at it a couple of times, we realized that it was quite boring. I did the voice over when i was very tired, and it sounds monotone. it also doesn't make any sense whatsoever.
some of the shots are too long, so we've decided to meet up and finalize the edit.

We will change the length of shots, and cut out shots. We'll record the narration again, and we'll record our music and put that on the piece.