Here are some of the things people said:
Editing 8
Sound 7
Camerawork 8
Control of Narrative 8.5
Characters 8
Good shot variety, good continuity style editing, good use of non-diegetic sound (especially that jazzy piano tune).
Editing 8
Sound 9
camera work 9
control of narrative 10
characters 9
Editing 8
Sound 10
Camera work 9
Control of Narrative 9
Characters 9
All in all, it's an excellent concept and you pulled if off very well
There were some lines of dialogue that were a bit off, like when the main character left the house, the delivery was a bit off
And it could've done without the last line, I think that it might've been a more powerful image if there had just been the main character with his smile on etc.
To be honest, better than I imagined it might end up
Sound 10
Camera work 9
Control of Narrative 9
Characters 9
All in all, it's an excellent concept and you pulled if off very well
There were some lines of dialogue that were a bit off, like when the main character left the house, the delivery was a bit off
And it could've done without the last line, I think that it might've been a more powerful image if there had just been the main character with his smile on etc.
To be honest, better than I imagined it might end up
All in all I feel we achieved our goals. Everyone seems to like it, and the views are moving quite fast on youtube (unfortunately on our first draft as its been on there for longer.)
Even though i can't physically watch it one more time, because of the amount of times i've seen it already, i'm proud of it.
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